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wilow |
edits
Jan 19 2008, 12:57 AM EST
guess i have more of an opinion than I thought i would : )I agree that affluence and also literacy in English afftect peoples ability to participate. Not sure if you mean accept or except in the second to last sentence. Do you mean except like excuse or accept? Either one works, just wanted to clarify for visualization's sake. The last couple lines feel like they're about to lead into something, maybe this could be another layer in, just leaving the idea of "Narcissm" up to the viewer -uh reader, still. One of the reasons the global village is growing is because of the use of the english language. Maybe one of the layers of communication - audio synchronizing with some repeated actions, or as an arc over a vignette of some sort. ok, I guess this belongs in another page now. Do you find this valuable? |
Smittened |
1. RE: edits
Jan 19 2008, 1:24 AM EST
I didn't include the ability to read English because there are lots of software available to translate websites; I guess maybe I should have included technoliteracy though. Plus I am not sure you could say that I am literate in English. You can pick up a lot by pretending to be educated. Seriously! thank Gaia for spellcheck. ,lol, < I meant accept. > I went to school with this bull dyke. Oh boy did she struggle then i found out she was completely illiterate and was about to graduate. No child left behind huh? Your last sentence reminds me of the ministry song. "Time keeps ticking away, on this path of damnation. Leading to the path of dismay. Leading to told degradation. Just one fix. (A new World Order)". It is fucked that all we can do is create a global village that isn't theirs because their's is going to happen. Probably does belong on another page perhaps oppression or capitalism or maybe we start a new one Globalization. Please feel empowered to make changes like the one you have suggested. Do you find this valuable? |
